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There was no moon shining in the sky of that foggy night.
There were no signs of life on that forgotten forest.
The darkness of the night in a place where there were no sings of life was something beautiful for Bloody Mary. Not even the grass grows there, and only the dead trees stand up.

That is why she likes the Forgotten Forest so much. There, she can be herself, she can think quietly about her life, and she feels a total solitude. She usually goes there when she has to think about something, or when something is disturbing her mind. But that night there was nothing to think about. Her mind was in peace, but she had the feeling that she must go to the forgotten forest.

After a long walking through those dead trees, her sences found that little colt hidden in the fog.

"It is a pity I already ate...such an easy prey is not found frequently" she thought for herself, but then, that little colt called her attention.

He was not a common horse, Bloody Mary could feel something strange on his essence. There was something uncommon on his blood. Her curiosity made her approach the foal, and that was when Monsta realised that someone was watching him.

The colt felt scared, his instincts told him that that mare was dangerous. He tried to run away, but the quiet and gentle voice of the mare stopped him.

"Don´t go" she said, and the little colt suddenly became paralized by the panic. His legs were shaking, but his inner braverty made him face the mare. He gazed at her eyes.

"A demon? Wow, interesting...where is your mother, lil´un?" The sweet tone of her voice made the foal feel secure again, that is one of the many tactics of Bloody Mary.

She was amazed by the little creature. She has never seen a foal like him, she didn´t know why or how, but she was sure that that foal was so special. Monsta, shocked, took a few moments to answer her question, and she used that time to observe him. His colour was very similar to her, grey manes and a dark coat. Those eyes without pupil, those strange shapes of grey markings on his body...yes, definitly, he was a demon horse.

"Mom is not here..." the foal answered very confused, he did not know what to do. Bloody Mary understood the real meaning of that sentence, the foal was all alone.

In that moment, something of him made her remember her days as a foal. She felt very identified with him: both were alone, with that evil blood running through their veins. The foal, soon or late, will have to face his true nature, and who would be a better teacher than her?

"I know what you are and what do you need. You could be my little devil." Bloody Mary would never aprove a breeding because, for her, it will be an act fo submission to the males. Her proud and honour would never permit it, so this is her only chance to be a mother. But she didn´t wanted to be a mother, she just wanted to raise an evil creature from who she could be proud of his cleverness in the future.

Monsta never stopped to gaze at her.
"I don´t need you" he said, and that was all that Bloody Mary needed in order to be fully convinced about raising that little colt. "He has the right attitude" she though for herself.

The arrogancy of the foal was not enough to stop her, and soon or late, Monsta will realise that he does need her help.

She would teach him how to survive, how to hunt, how to inflict pain on others, how to shup up his mind and only use it when it is needed. She would also teach him to listen to his instincts.

But he would teach her how to love.

Is she going to make a beast out of that foal? Or is he going to remove the beast that is inside that mare?



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English

I´m trying to adopt Monsta from :iconsturmfeuer:. I really like that foal :) I´m sorry for the long bg story, I was kinda inspired lol.

about the pic, I´m proud of the soft colouring of Bloody Mary and Monsta, but I hate the background. Critics are welcomed!

Oh, I need your opinion about the frame that I used here. I think it looks great but I´m not sure...


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Estoy tratando de adoptar a Monsta de :iconsturmfeuer:. Me parece un potrillo muy interesante, y creo que va muy bien con Bloody Mary. Perdón por la historia tan larga, es un requisito para la adopción y bueh se ve que estaba inspirada jaja, soy muy vaga como para traducirla xD.

Con respecto al dibujo, me encanta lo suave que quedó el coloreado de Bloody Mary y de Monsta, pero el fondo esta horrible....Críticas bienvenidas!

Ah! Necesito saber que opinan del marco que le agregué...a mi me gusta mucho como queda, le da un toque mas formal y mejora mucho la presentación.

Bloody Mary & Pic (c) myself
Monsta Design (c) :iconsturmfeuer:
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:icontarzz96:
wow mate this has to be my most fav of what you have done so far i love the background and the story that you put in to it, and all the detail on both the horses i also like the stands of the little foal it's like he is so scard but at the same time he is standing he's ground all out love this great work mate

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:iconkiminuria:
Bueno, el pic está espectacular, y la historia está muy interesante también. Los caballos están genial, y el fondo también está muy logrado, con esa atmósfera siniestra creada por la niebla que va muy bien con los personajes, y queda bien con el ambiente boscoso. La textura del camino también está muy bien, lo único que la combinación de personajes y fondos falla un poco, ya que el potro no proyecta sombra en el suelo y no parece que esté apoyado en él, quedando un poco raro. Pero por lo demás está muy bien :)

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:icongeor18:
Muchas gracias :hug: La verdad no me habia dado cuenta de lo de la sombra pero ahora que lo decis veo a lo que te referis n_n muchas gracais por ahcermelo ver!

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Horse Lover
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And I love to :hug: people!!

Avy by: [link] :heart:
:iconacutecat:
I like the frame, and I think you did a nice job with the background. :)
:icongeor18:
Thank you a lot :hug:

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Horse Lover
Dragon Lover
Wolf Lover

And I love to :hug: people!!

Avy by: [link] :heart:
:iconblackrrose2:
so beautiful.i love the stroy its tuching and sweet :D and the colors and amassing background in the pick is breathatking:D i love it:D

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life is a box of boredome,unlike a box of chockolates life only comes in one or two flavors.they are hard times,and disapointment.
id rather have the one with the fruity center myself.
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:icongeor18:
Thank you a lot! I´m glad you took the time to read the story :)

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Horse Lover
Dragon Lover
Wolf Lover

And I love to :hug: people!!

Avy by: [link] :heart:
:iconblackrrose2:
your verry welcome :D i lvoed it.
im even working on my own harpg character.i hope they like and accept me.

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life is a box of boredome,unlike a box of chockolates life only comes in one or two flavors.they are hard times,and disapointment.
id rather have the one with the fruity center myself.
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:iconsturmfeuer:
omg, you created such a great atmosphere in this image and the story is gorgeous :faint:.
I love especially these two passages:
""Mom is not here..." the foal answered very confused, he did not know what to do. Bloody Mary understood the real meaning of that sentence, the foal was all alone."
and
"Is she going to make a beast out of that foal? Or is he going to remove the beast that is inside that mare?"
The location of the image is so eerie *it gives me creeps*. I love Monsta´s pose - it looks suspiciously and defiant. Like he is trying to resist Bloody Mary´s voice.
Bloody Mary looks awesome (as always). Her wavy hair is beautiful. I think she has a dangerous-beautiful aura.
This is much more than I have ever expected for an adoption pic. I am enthused.
Monsta is almost yours :). I would love to write you down as new owner at once but referring to my adoption rules he needs also a reference sheet first (don´t worry you will definitely get him ;) ).

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photo for my avatar is from ~absurdus
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